User:Emily.krauskopf/Draft:Dinah M. Gretsch/JJames2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emily.krauskopf, Sierramarie.woodman,


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Dinah M. Gretsch


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dinah M. Gretsch

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article seems to be organized very well and the information you have for the lead section is off to a great start, make sure in the begging of the lead section, Dinah's full name is in bold. The only thing missing is the information for other sections on this page like early life, career and etc. Overall this article is making great progress and your group is doing a great job. --JJames2 (talk) 01:59, 7 April 2021 (UTC)