User:Emily.patashnik/Pelagia noctiluca/Savanna.deer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emily.patashnik


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Pelagia noctiluca


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pelagia noctiluca

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

-lead was not edited

Content

-The new content that was added was easy to understand and concise. Content is information that is not readily available - which is good because now the average person who doesn't know much about inverts. will have a better time understanding how this type of jelly eats! The only think I would add is to fix the citation at the end of the paragraph and maybe add a diagram labeling the parts of the stomach (if possible). Otherwise, great edit!

Tone and Balance

-Tone is neutral through the entire page

Sources and References

-Sources come from research done by scientists showing true real life answers. All accurate information

Organization

-Content is concise and easy to read - someone who is not familiar with the topic will understand it easily!

-No spelling or grammatical errors noted

Images and Media

-No images or media