User:Emily.rose827/Zoo in Budapest/NicolasSmith216 Peer Review

When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that

were confusing to you.

The plot summary was extremely thourough

Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or

events?

Yes, most if not all external links seem to be functioning and in proper place

Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself?

No, all information appears to be contained from within the movie.

Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct?

None that I spotted

Any other comments on the entry?

The plot summary feels very lengthy, I would suggest trimming a bit if possible,