User:Emily313/Animation/Adavid192 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emily313


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Animation


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The main issue I saw with the article were a few opinionated statements. I posted in the talk page that the specific sentences sounded as if they were trying to persuade readers to a certain belief. Other than that, I did not catch any major issues while reading the article.