User:EmilyParrish/E. B. Lewis (illustrator)/ElleWidogast Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? EmilyParrish
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:EmilyParrish/E. B. Lewis (illustrator)

Lead
The lead is clear and concise. From the get go I know who the article is about, but it is not overly detailed.

Content
The content added sticks to the topic at hand: E. B. Lewis. As far as I can tell this information is up-to-date and complete without extraneous details.

Tone and Balance
A neutral tone is maintained throughout the article. There is no attempt to persuade a reader one way or another.

Sources and References
The references appear reliable. All the links I checked worked fine. I would perhaps add more citations in the text. When reading two to three paragraphs that only have one citation, I was uncertain whether or not all of the information was pertaining to that single reference. However, looking at the references I believe they did so my suggestion might be citation overkill.

Organization
Separating biography and career as two different headings seems a little counter intuitive. I would consider changing the biography heading to something along the lines of early life and education or possibly turning career into a subheading to biography. However, it is ultimately organized in an easy to read and understand manner.

Overall impressions
The edits and additions are clear, concise, and improve the quality of the article. The biography heading titles and/or the separation of the biography and career headings might be reconsidered and more citations, despite repetitiveness might be added.