User:Emily J. L./Freedom of Access to Clinic Entrances Act/Kfsimerau Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emily J. L.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emily%20J.%20L./Freedom_of_Access_to_Clinic_Entrances_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freedom of Access to Clinic Entrances Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
To start, I think the changes made to the original are helpful in providing updates and more information on the law. The current version of the article has no legislative history section, so I think that adding one in was great for the draft. I would suggest adding to the legislative history section more information about whether there was a lot of disagreement over the bill in the house/senate before its passage. Additionally, I would suggest adding if either party was fighting the passage of the bill and how that affected the make up of the bill, if applicable. I also like how you revamped the judicial review section and added in more information and I think that it is really helpful. My only other suggestion would be if it is applicable to add in a more recent case. Over all, I think the edits are really well done.