User:Emilyeisinger/Pollination/Bzs23psu Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that was added was up to date. One thing that could be done better was follow the lines of the sources a little bit better and not go directly from them. Everything else was good. Good amount of content has been added which is good.