User:Emilyeisinger/Pollination/Eshasameer Peer Review

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Emilyeisinger
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The language used in the drafted changes was articulated extremely well. The summarisation of the points presented was neat and precise. The subject chosen was interesting as well. The content is reliable, well cited, and can be backed up. However, I think a more vivid vocabulary can be incorporated.