User:Emilyeisinger/Pollination/Esuhanoble1 Peer Review

General info
(Emilyeisinger)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pollination&action=edit :Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pollination&action=edit

Evaluate the drafted changes
With the different sources Emilyesinger provided about pollination,they helped add more depth to the article she was editing. A small example is how adding things like how pollinated agents can be animals like beetles and butterflies, and how they carry pollination on their body from one transfer to another.

These are good sources that give the article more meaning.