User:Emilyg01/Dunbar-Hunter Expedition of 1804-1805/WThiels Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emilyg01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Dunbar-Hunter Expedition of 1804-1805


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the whole of your article felt good. The content was kept neutral and the cites used fit the theme well. Since this article is about the expedition as noted by the title I would try to make the Journey section longer as what happens on the journey is just as important as discoveries made. Overall though it's good.