User:Emilyherberholz/Nat (Yekeno) Lee/Snaughton Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username) Emilyherberholz
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Emilyherberholz/Nat (Yekeno) Lee

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? This is a new article.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes, it does.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes, the information is elaborated in the rest of the article.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? The lead is concise and in a few sentences summarizes everything

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, the content focuses on the artists life and music.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes, the information includes everything from childhood year to present day.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? There could be information about their albums that could be added.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes, the content doesn't have any opinions presented and focuses more writing about who she is.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? There are none.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No, the article focuses on her biography and her work.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No. It is neutral throughout.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes, the articles used are nonbiased.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes, They are relating to the band and the artist.
 * Are the sources current? Yes, the sources are current.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes they work.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes, the article has little to no sentence fluency errors.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? There are no grammatical or spelling errors.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes, they are separated by years.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Yes, one includes a picture of the artist as a nurse during Covid and one at a festival.
 * Are images well-captioned? Yes, they give a clear idea of what's happening.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? Yes.
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? As best as it could.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? Yes.
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? There are 10 sources that touch on different topics.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? It does not contain a infobox but it does have section headings.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? No, it doesn't.

Overall impressions
So your overall article is good. You might have to add an infobox. Maybe something like her name, nationality and birthdate. You should add more information about her songs and their meanings. I think it would make it balanced between her bio and her music. Also you should add an article link since this is a new article. And add section headings

Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?