User:Emilyhg.371/2019 Visayas earthquake/Dstrafaci Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

2019 Eastern Samar


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emilyhg.371/2019_Visayas_earthquake?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2019 Eastern Samar earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reading both your draft as well as the actual article itself, I can see you have a few good ideas of new sections you can add. The sections you have added such as "Geography", "First Hand Accounts" and "Damages" all offer a lot more insight into the earthquake than the original article did. I also believe that the sources you have used for these sections are proper sources, however I believe that you have a few sections where hyper-links to other wiki pages or citations are needed. For example, the first sentence in the "First Hand Accounts" section has good information, but is missing a proper source. I think it would also be a good addition if you hyper-linked words such as "Visayas" and "Samar" so people could click on those links and be taken straight to the wiki pages of those places. I believe another section that would be good for you guys to add would be economic impact, local impact, and public response. These could be their own sections, or they could go along with damages, but I believe they would bring your article to another level. I think you could also elaborate on the casualties section of the article and offer a few more diagrams and pictures of the event itself. Overall, I think you guys have a solid start, simply adding a few sections, a bit more data along with citations, as well as a few diagrams and pictures, will make your article much better.

Emily's Reply
Thank you for your peer review, it is really helpful and I will implement many of your suggestions into the final draft of our article. You went very in depth and gave many suggestions which will make our project even better.