User:Emilyhg.371/2019 Visayas earthquake/Dtbrune2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

2019 Visayas earthquake


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emilyhg.371/2019 Visayas earthquake
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2019 Eastern Samar earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how you've chosen to add information about the tectonic zone where the earthquake took place, but the information about the geography in the region is unnecessary unless you add how the earthquake affected the agriculture, certain areas, etc.. First hand accounts is a good thing to add but more than one would be needed. Potentially expand upon the damages part. If you can find the monetary damage lost because of the earthquake that would be a good thing to add. It is also a region dependent on agriculture so you could add how that was affected by the earthquake.

Emily's Reply
We will take into account adding the information in the geography sections to make it necessary for the article. Thank you for all the helpful feedback on other parts we can add to make our article better.