User:Emilyhg.371/2019 Visayas earthquake/Marysarkis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emilyhg.371


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emilyhg.371/2019 Visayas earthquake
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 2019 Eastern Samar earthquake

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article I am reviewing looks good thus far, though definitely needs additional information going forward. The addition of the geography section is a good choice. So far they have added some good background information about the location and the topography, which is important to help understand then history and location of where the earthquake occurred. The user has also added a section about first hand accounts. Another strong choice of a section to add. The next section the user added was a section about damage, which is an important section to have been discussing earthquakes. They could also call this an impact section, or do a completely different section about the impacts and aftermath of the earthquake. The sources section is properly organized and all sources have been cited.

The overall current version of the article does not have a lead section or much information at all, besides an earthquake section. So all the sections the user wants to add would definitely be strong additions. There is only one photo of a map on the current version of the article so more pictures of possible damage or maps could be added to the article as well. Though a great start thus far!

Nick's Response
Thank you for your feedback and positive comments. I'm glad that you like the direction we are going in, I think it makes the most sense passed off of what the article already provides. You are absolutely right it is a good idea to find some more pictures of the damages and maybe another map or two that shows the affected area. I think that you have an interesting idea with breaking up the damage section into impact and aftermath sections. I agree that this will be a good way for us to organize the information so that the reader has a clear understanding of what immiedate and long term effects were specifically caused by this earthquake. And thank you for pointing out the fact that there is not a lead section, i will make sure we add a short summary of some of the basics of this event at the beginning to capture the readers attention.