User:Emilyjoanna/Ephesian Tale/HoCL1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emilyjoanna


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emilyjoanna/Ephesian_Tale?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ephesian Tale

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I wasn't able to do a complete peer review because Emilyjoanna hasn't added anything to the sandbox draft. I think the article needs an introduction section with clear and organized background information. The article could also use information from other resources.