User:Emilylavia/Jane C. Wright/Sims1109 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)Emilylavia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emilylavia/Jane C. WrightLink to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)In your draft article I like the information that showed on the key notes that were focusing on the lost information that were particularly going on during her years in medical school. Plus the extra information on the early life was very useful to gain the background knowledge of the whole family that pursed a medical career.