User:Emilym714/Anonymous Boy/Paolavillacis Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Paola Villacís


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Anonymous Boy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anonymous Boy

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is thorough and clear, unbiased and very well-worded. The information on Tony Arena, where Emily refers to him in a way that sounds informative and straight-forward. The table of contents is well-organized and used well, the sections are easy to get through and to understand. There's images to back up the linear timeline of Arena's work. Overall, the article does not need any polishing in my personal opinion. It is transparent and perfectly executed. The citations make sense and link to verifiable sources.