User:Emilym714/Anonymous Boy/Papaya99 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emilym714


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Anonymous Boy
 * Anonymous Boy

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is very thorough and informative! It focuses mainly on Anonymous Boy's contributions to queer comics, as well as his writing and filmmaking, with less of a focus on his personal life. The article clearly establishes notability with the inclusion of links and is organized in a digestible and easy-to-understand manner. The inclusion of visuals adds to the page's layout, as well as the blurb square at the beginning giving a brief overview of Anonymous Boy. The tone is neutral and does not use any biased words (e.g the best, the only, etc.). The references also look reliable and are cited as necessary. The only recommendation would be to get rid of the links to pages that do not exist, as they are red in the published article.