User:Emilyngu3/Mighty-O Donuts/Ashleyglim Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emilyngu3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emilyngu3/Mighty-O_Donuts?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mighty-O Donuts

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead in this article is really strong. It is succinct but provides enough information for the reader to continue the article. I like how it's an overall summary and tells the readers what is

Content: Content of the article was well sectioned and included much more detail than the original article. I enjoyed how you included the founding of Mighty-o-Donuts as well as the Community Involvements.

Tone and balance: The content and tone of the piece is neutral. The only thing maybe is to change "In addition, Mighty-O's work to strengthen the Seattle community.." because it may seem a bit biased.

Sources and references: There are many useful sources cited in this piece. They are all up-to-date, and the ones that are a few years old are still reliable and contains detailed information that probably stayed the same throughout the years.

Organization: I really liked the organization/set-up of this piece. You included way more headings, as the original only had the brief summary/ lead. Well organized and each section is clear on what it is going to talk about.

Images: There is one image of the logo which is clear. Maybe you can add another image of one of it's founding locations or the donuts as well!

VERY CUTE ARTICLE, I am tempted to go visit! Good job