User:Emilyrath/sandbox

Article Evaluation on Josephine Flood
Good information that relates well to the topic. There are, however, some minor grammatical errors and missing commas throughout, which is distracting because you have to stop and figure out that there is a comma missing before you understand the sentence. Something I would really like to see is more about the story on how Josephine Flood just happened upon what I think is the greatest discovery of her career. It is mentioned that she found Cloggs Cave on her way to something else but more details are not added on later. In the article, it is mentioned that Flood retires early to do research and other things but I'm a little confused by what she is retiring from. I think a simple clarifying addition there would go a long way. The overview of the article is very short and feels like it is missing that solid preview that I personally find helpful when I'm trying to look someone or something up quick. Some sentences feel like they should have their own reference. At least one reference link takes you to a Page Not Found.