User:Emilywheeler56/Peripheral artery disease/Photogdahl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Emilywheeler56)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emilywheeler56/Peripheral artery disease


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Peripheral artery disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The information added was explained in a neutral tone, and only facts with reliable sources to back them up were used. Good job on adding the missing citations. I did not know anything about PAD before this, but I definitely feel like I learned something and was able to comprehend not only the information Emily added, but the article as a whole. I think the addition of other possible symptoms was a good call that added to the usefulness. I know you didn't add them, but the photos used for sure aided in visual understanding. Good job!