User:Emisj/Psychogenic pruritus/Spikeandwave Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Emisj


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Psychogenic_pruritus&oldid=1077763302


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Psychogenic_pruritus&oldid=1077763302

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead appropriately reflects the content of the page and gives a brief summary of all the sections. It could be useful to add more links in this section. For example, adding links to the terms: dermatologic, neuropathic, and psychogenic. I feel like those could be terms that are unlikely to be understood by people not in the medical field.

Content

The content seems up-to-date. In the diagnosis section, I would recommend spelling out CBC and ESR since not everyone knows what those abbreviations mean.

Tone and Balance

The content is neutral and does not persuade the reader.

Sources and References

Great job on adding references for each piece of information added.

Organization

The epidemiology section seems out of place. I would suggest placing the treatment section right after the diagnosis section and then placing epidemiology before symptoms, but that's my opinion.

Overall Impression

Overall, the page is easily digestible. The content added has improved the quality of the article.