User:Emjo2000/Stimming/Aclark00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emjo2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emjo2000/Stimming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stimming

Evaluate the drafted changes
For the section you have added, be careful with bias. There seems to be bias towards the acceptance of stimming behaviors as opposed to providing objective information. You should look into applied behavior analysis. I could be a good section to add since it focuses on those with a diagnosis of ASD. Try to not state an opinion. You could add examples of stimming behaviors. I think you have a good section going, but there is much revision needed before publication. Another point that can be added is the term 'automatic reinforcement' for those stimming behaviors.