User:Emjo2000/Stimming/Gabutler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

emjo2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emjo2000/Stimming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stimming

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm assuming the underlined sentences are the contributions you've made. While this contribution is informative of how stimming is a part of autistic individuals identity, I think perhaps any mention of the stigmatization and prevention of stimming should have it's own section. It could be under a heading such as "History and Stigmatization," where you can lead into the current research and why the autistic community is against it. I think adding a section on other disorders that feature stimming could be beneficial as well. The article itself could use a few grammar edits and has some misspelled words. However I think this is a good starting point on an important topic. Good job!