User:Emjo2000/Stimming/Layladye Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emjo2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emjo2000/Stimming?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Stimming

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is written well and organized, though I think you could rephrase it in a way that it transitions better just so it does not feel like the sentence comes out of the blue. Something like, "While stimming is a way to relieve anxiety and other heightened emotions, it has been highly stigmatized and dramatized." The links work and are reputable with multiple authors as well as contains recent information. Other than that, this information as well as the section on Treatment and Intervention are well written and concise. They wrote great inductors sentences on their Treatment and Intervention section to provide why people with autism are pushing for treatment options. Overall, the content added greatly benefits this article and the strengths include good explanatory sentences and concise information.