User:Emjwatson/Ecofeminism/Fujia0801 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emjwatson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emjwatson/Ecofeminism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Effective phrasing and paraphrasing (provide a fairly neutral tone without any bias)

- Selective use of pictures (this clearly shows consistency with the subject matter)

- The lead section gives a good and straightforward start, but more fundamental information and explanation for the definition of ecofeminism may be required to help the audience understand. (but the choice of branches is really good)

- The sources are trustworthy and current so far (which met the Wikipedia’s Notability requirements)

- The "vegan ecofeminism, materialist/Marxist ecofeminism, and spiritual/cultural ecofeminism" noted in the opening paragraph may benefit from greater debate.

- I believe there is some reference to this in the UN 2030 SDGs (more examples could be provided).

- Overall, excellent job!