User:Emjwatson/Ecofeminism/Mtgravesande Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emjwatson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emjwatson/Ecofeminism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ecofeminism

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead is updated to include new added content.
 * You have a lot of links to concepts you mention, which is helpful.
 * Your Ecofeminism and colonialism section would make sense under the main article's Major critiques section.
 * The Queer ecofeminism section might be harder to understand for a more general audience.
 * There are a lot of reliable sources, which is good.
 * Overall, the two main sections you are adding improve the quality of the main article. You are adding historically marginalized perspectives to the article and so that is beneficial.