User:Emjwatson/Ecofeminism/Sparamin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emjwatson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emjwatson/Ecofeminism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ecofeminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

-Good selection of photos to accompany content

-Solid amount of sources for the content added. All relevant and fairly recent

-Added content supplements original article, good choices for addition

-Check grammar. A few instances of run on sentences with a lot of commas. Could potentially be broken down into more concise sentences

-Overall, a great contribution. Put special care into where this would fit into the original article as it is already quite dense