User:Emkajo0216/Clothing swap/Sherrysyc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emkajo0216


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emkajo0216/Clothing swap


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Clothing swap

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like that the motives and barriers sections you added to the article. The two new sections are written in a neutral tone with valid references and make the original article more complete. You layout the two aspects of clothing swap without favor any specific position. I think you did a great job on your first draft.

I listed a few suggestions for you:


 * Leading
 * The lead looks good overall. The only suggestion I have is adding a bit more detail relating to the motives and barriers.
 * Sources and References
 * Maybe modify the layout of reference section.
 * Organization
 * I would suggest to change the page layout to how the original article looks like. I assume that you did not copy the code in Source Editing from the original article and paste it to your sandbox. Copy the code also helps format the reference section.