User:Eml5597/Ottoman Empire/Mjc6876 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

eml5597


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Eml5597/Ottoman Empire - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ottoman Empire - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Perhaps instead of "prompted them to" in the last sentence you could switch it to something like "resulted in". "Successful" in front "Greek War of Indepence" might be a bit superfluous but that's obviously your call. I'd add a bit more to the article but your additions seem fine, nothing to really complain about from me besides stuff that seems nit picky at best.