User:Emma.Fagan/Angola–China relations/Rh915119 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emma.fagan


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Angola–China relations
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Angola–China relations
 * Angola–China relations

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the draft that I read is certainly a strong foundation for a good article. I found the sections to be well written, so great job on that! The graphics were clean and added to the page well. There is not any bias or opinionated writing which is a good thing. I think the Political Ties section could use some work as right now it is only one source/one sentence. This section feels like it should be one of the most important, so I believe it could be expanded a bit more. One aspect I was a little confused about is essentially why China and Angola have this relationship- aka why was it and why is it seen as beneficial? Just a thought- overall, this is a good start on a good looking page!