User:Emmaa10

My name is Emma Clayson and i am a writer. Below is a plot of the story i am writing called 'Home' and i wish for it to be noticed sometime. I thought if i out it on here, people could give me ideas on it.

'Home' plot-- The story starts off with Ally and Connie, two best friends in the changing rooms at a local clothes shop. After discussing what to wear for the party they are attenting the next night, Connie offers to buy Ally an outfit. Taking up her offer, Ally accepts and the girls go home. The next night, Ally, Connie and their other friend Rochelle are all getting ready. The girls show their humour as they apply their makeup and do their hair. The taxi arrives and they leave for the party. Once arriving there, they realsing that it wasn’t all it turned out to be, well all apart from Rochelle who is distracted by Kane, the boy she likes. Ally goes off on her own while Connie is on the phone to her boyfriend Liam. As Ally is sitting down, Will, a boy from her school approaches her and they get talking, but after saying something he shouldn’t have, he leaves Ally in a mood as Connie returns. Noticing her friends mood, she suggests to leave and go back to Liam’s house.

The girls leave, just in time ti catch Rochelle and Kane kissing in the corner. They say their goodbyes and get the taxi to Liam’s. When they arrive, Ally notices a boy also at Liam’s house. She soon finds out that the boy is Jack, Liam’s friend who is staying there for the night. After a car ride Ally and Jack soon start talking for the rest of the night. The next morning, he offers to drive her home and then asks to see her again. She doesn’t hesitate to agree, and so the couple start to see each other over a period of a week. Realising their feelings, Jack confronts Ally about them who then gives off a hint that she feels the same way. The couple leave it at that, much to Allys disappointment.

Over the next two months, the couple see more and more of each other and realize they have fallen in love with one another but it soon ends as Jack receives a letter telling him that he has got into university which is in Birmingham, 3 hours away from where they live. He cant bring himself to tell Ally that he can no longer see her, so she finds out from Liam a week before Jack is set to leave causing Ally to be upset and angry with Jack that he didn’t tell her. The couple end up fighting and Ally slaps Jack and walks off down the road. Jack looks on as he watches the love of his life walk away from him knowing he shouldn’t let this get in the way. The next morning he trys to ring her, but her brother picks up leading to them having an argument over Ally. Her brother suggest he rings no more and leaves Ally alone. Jack, not wanting to hurt the one he loves anymore, does what hes told and leaves for university. Ally, being upset turns to Will, the boy she had met at the party a couple of months before. The two start talking, but Ally is not so keen on Will as she just can’t get Jack out of her mind. None the less, they start to go out and before you know it. Ally seems to have forgotten about Jack, al though she thinks.

It then shows Ally 10 years later, working as a photographer for a fashion shoot in London where she now lives. Whilst on the job, she receives a phone call from her mum explaining that her father has fallen ill. Leaving the shoot, she rushes off to get the next train back to Northampton. Arriving home, she vists her family ill father. A few weeks pass and her father is on the road to recovery, after suffering from a serious heart attack. Whilst back in Northampton, she decides to take a leave from work for the summer and stay there to help look after her dad. She catches up with Connie who is now a lawyer and is married to Toby. After talking in the local café, Connie asks about Ally’s love life. She hesitates, and then says she attempted to go down the asile but couldn’t do it. So the wedding was cancelled and Ally went back to single life again, even though she was about to marry Will. Realising that even 10 eyars down the line, she never really did love Will the way she loves Jack and never will. Realising what she said, Connie says how Jack has been living here for the past 7 years. Trying to get off the subject, Connie convinces Ally to get back in touch. Worried what he would say, she decides to not go along with it until they suddenly meet in the forest where they first realized how they felt for one another. Ally was walking her old horse when she came across Jack sitting on a fallen tree with a dog. The couple talk and arrange to go out for a drink. After meeting again, they realize that the love never left them and they sleep together for the first time. The next day, Ally brother finds out, still holding a grudge of what Jack did to Ally, he goes mad and starts to hit him. Ally then turns to Connie for advice who suggests she forget what everyone else thinks and do what she wants. Realising it’s Jack that she wants, she goes out to meet him, ringing him but not being able to get through. As Ally is driving she notices ambulances and police cars surrounding a car on the road. Recognising the car, she stops and rushes over to the scene. She notices Jack just laying on the road after being oulled out of his car from being in an accident. After crying and screaming she runs over to his body and just hugs him. The paramedics then pull her away as they take Jack to the hospital. Jack is in a coma for 3 weeks and when he wakes up, the first person he see’s is Ally as she explaining how she feels about him. Noticing he is awake she hugs him as the two kiss and makeup from an event that happened almost a month ago. A few weeks pass and it shows Ally and Jack happily togther like they where 10 years ago. The story then ends with the two dancing in the forest like they had done when they where 18, 10 years before.