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Intro:
Basic explanation of decomposition

Decomposition within Hot and Humid environments:
How this factor changes the process of decomposition

Different situations where this environment exists:

 * Time of year and location
 * Car, enclosed house
 * Outdoor and indoor affects

Decomposition within Cold and Dry environments:
How this factor changes the process of decomposition

Different situations where this environment exists:

 * Time of year and location
 * Basement

Decomposition within Water:
How this factor changes the process of decomposition

Different situations where this environment exists:

 * Time of year and location
 * Lake, River, Pool, Flood zones

Article Topic: The Decomposition Process of Human Remains within Different Environments
My topic will focus of the differences between the decomposition of human remains within different environments and conditions. The environments that I will focus around will be warm and cold temperatures, water, and humid climates.

COMMENT: sounds great, but what is the page that you will be editing? Please also list some sources that you will use. Julianfulton (talk) 04:18, 23 February 2019 (UTC)

Article Evaluation: The Birds (film)
Evaluating Content:

Everything it the article is relevant to the topic of The Birds (film) by Alfred Hitchcock. The only distraction would be perhaps some small rabbit holes going down Alfred Hitchcock's personality and other productions. All of the information seems up to date an there does not seem to have any missing information. The one thing I would improve on would be to have a clearer timeline of events in the production of the film.

Evaluating Tone:

The article holds a neutral tone throughout the explanation of the film and does not appear to push any biases to any particular position. One view point that could be better represented would be the perspective of the author the film was based around.

Evaluating Sources:

The citations all look reliable and open to the original source. Almost all of the facts have an adjacent source to link the reader too. Most of the information is gathered from recognizable and reliable sources, such as The Washington Post and The New York Times.

The Talk Page:

Some of the conversation going on the the talk room include more discussion on the special effects of the film as well as some of the events that inspired Alfred Hitchcock to create the film. The article is part of four WikiProjects; WikiProject Film, WikiProject Horror, WikiProject California/San Fransisco Bay area and WikiProject Library of Congress. All of the WikiProjects are rated as a C-class.