User:Emmadeitz/Hillbilly Highway/Aer0033 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Aer0033


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emmadeitz/Hillbilly Highway - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * "Where the Hillbilly Highway ends"

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.) I In the draft, you did a  really good job showing the difference in the articles and the one that stuck out to me the most was the one about the Michigan migration. The wiki artcile didn't really mention the discrimination and that is unfair because the audimce desreves a fair an unbiased view.