User:Emmadeitz/Hillbilly Highway/JSchultzJr Peer Review

I like how you have everything organized into the sections you are editing. I do find that some of the statement you are saying are somewhat repetitive compared to the actual Wikipedia article. A recommendation I have is to possibly reword or add the the introduction of the article giving more detail and mention what the article will be talking about as a whole. Also add a summary of everything in the article tied of into one small paragraph. Also I would double check the grammar as I see places that needs a space and wording that can be better. Besides the small details I believe its a good start.