User:Emmaf419/Sepiella inermis/Robinkf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emmaf419

Itasca Motter and Emma Fellenbaum


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Sepiella inermis - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

'Sepiella inermis'' is a species of cuttlefish in the family Sepiidae. It is found primarily in the Indo-Pacific region. In this region, Sepiella inermis is an economically important species, and is sold and eaten'''

- Well done, nice and concise but includes the most important identifying information.

Description:

...a relatively small species of cuttlefish, with an average mantle length of about 50mm

- relative to what? coud you put an example of the typical size of other species of its genus, or what are you comparing it to?

Distribution

...found throughout the Indo-Pacific region

- Is it prevalent evenly throughout this area? Aer there specific places where it has been sited? Is it particularly abundant or important in certain areas?

Reproduction and Development

...all affect seasonal peaks

- peaks of what Of abundance? Of mating events? Of reproductive output?

- great description of the reproductive behavior

... on branch-like substrates

- What are branch like substrates? Branch like corals? Actually branches? Why?

...have a planktonic habit.

- What does this mean?

- Otherwise, great description of development

Behavior and Ecology

...highly tolerable to fluctuations in the environment

- Like what? Temperature? Salinity? Turbidity?

Economic Importance

- this section is very general to cuttlefish, however in the lead of your article you mention this species specifically in caught and eaten. Cuold you give more detail about the fishery of this specific species? What cultures/ countries/ areas/ people eat it? How?

-Well done Itasca and Emma! See if you can add more to the sections/ questions I had above, but this is looking really good!

-Robin