User:Emmalauren19/National Civil Rights Museum/0diego0 Peer Review

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Emmalauren19


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User:Emmalauren19/National Civil Rights Museum


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National Civil Rights Museum

Content
I liked the added details about the Motel's feature in the book, Smith refusing to enter the museum, and Smith's sign.

Tone and Balance
The added, and edited, information is well written and well placed in the article.

Sources and References
All of the sources work well, and are reliable. If possible, additional sources could be used where the article says further citations are needed.

Organization
For an already existing article of this size, the edits are good. I think that under the "History" section, you should keep most of "The site began..." sentence and just add the detail about being an all-white establishment instead. The "In 1945, Walter and Loree..." sentence and rest of it works well.

Images and Media
I think the images on the existing article might be enough already, but maybe one or a few about what it looked like before it was named the Lorrain Motel. It might be hard to find, or it might have kept its look from the start, but I think one would help.

Overall Impressions
I liked the edits that have been made, but it might be possible to go back and look for places to add small details that help the overall description. A few more citations and it'll be all set!