User:Emmamlewis/Great Smoky Mountains National Park/Mnelson25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emmamlewis


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emmamlewis/Great Smoky Mountains National Park
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Great Smoky Mountains National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * a few spelling and grammar errors
 * there is no lead
 * content is neutral and is adding to the overall article quality
 * content is concise and clear
 * the sources are credible and the links work
 * the last reference should probably be changed to have it starting with "Laws & Polices..."
 * could add images if you want
 * overall it's short and sweet and gets the job done. Adding the rules of the park to the wiki site is a very good contribution