User:Emmamlewis/Great Smoky Mountains National Park/Wnfrase Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emmamlewis


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emmamlewis/Great_Smoky_Mountains_National_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I thought your draft was really good! There was a lot of information that was impartial, thorough, and informative! All of your links work and go to a professional site. My criticism here would be to maybe choose another site to reference. I liked the rules and regulations your chose to mention. However, I would shorten it a little bit and maybe add a little bit of information as to why those rules are in place (e.g. history, affects of wildlife, etc). I also thought your article was easy to read, no glaring errors. Good job!