User:Emmamullins24/Tracey Weldon/KellyRedmond2020 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emmamullins24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Tracey Weldon
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead has a simple but effective introductory sentence that makes it clear what the article is about. The lead lacks a brief descriptionof the articles main sections, but I am not positive if that is necessary since they are present in teh content box.

The content of the article is revelant and up to date. If possible, try and fin a little more information on her education.

The content of the article in neutral and informative. there do not appear to be any claims that are biased or over/underrepresented.

All sources appear to be updated and reliable. the content accurately reflects the sources.

The content is well organized in a manner that is clear, consise, and easy to read. NOTE: make sure to italicize the name of the documentary in the career section.