User:Emmamwasserman/Reproductive labor/Mbluek Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emmamwasserman


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emmamwasserman/Reproductive_labor?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a really solid draft with good information. Clear and easy to read as well as strong sources to illustrate your additions. The draft does an excellent job of covering topics of race, gender, class, etc. Overall a great start with excellent sources. For improvements, the sentence beginning with "Moreover, the exploitation of reproductive labor in Western democracies..." is a bit difficult to read through. Maybe consider rephrasing for clarity or breaking it into smaller sections?

[Eiko: Karly, you forgot to say HOW Emma may be able to improve her articles(!)]