User:Emmareside/Harold Lasswell/Dunsno Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * User: Emmareside


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emmareside/Harold Lasswell
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Harold Lasswell
 * Harold Lasswell

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- Clear and concise introduction to his life (key info is easily available at the top of he page)

- Not sure if you need the dash in "personal-ity" when listing book titles

- Good citations

- Could add images (possibly of book covers)

- Could add links between the works you have listed, to separate wiki pages about those work (if they exist) in order to become more discoverable