User:Emmareside/Harold Lasswell/YWCMN2160 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)

Emmareside


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Harold Lasswell


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Very good article, the content is relevant to the title of the article and the tone is neutral. The structure of the article is also very clear. The reader can also get a clear picture of Harold Lasswell's life story. But it would have been nice to have more details about his contributions.