User:Emmasandell/MyPlate/IsabellaCarufel Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emmasandell


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emmasandell/MyPlate?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * MyPlate

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Emma! Overall I think you have added a lot of valuable information to your article. You have a strong lead that reflect the content in your article. I think adding to the “guideline” section is really beneficial to users looking to use this tool. Something to think about for adding content would be to add more about how MyPlate evolved from MyPyramid in the background section since it seems like a direct replacement of it. Also it might be beneficial to add content to the National Strategic Partners and a section pertaining to how MyPlate has changed since its launch in 2011. Your tone is neutral throughout the article which is great and you added some great content!!!

I had a question about the second paragraph under guidelines - if the reduction of sugar intake is sugar altogether or processed sugar? Or does MyPlate not differ the two? just wondering!

Overall great article! Let me know if you have any questions ~