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This is my minor edit for our wiki laboratory

From the Domestic Violence in Australia page, stub re South Australia

Original:

On 22 March 2011, Zahra Abrahimzadeh died after being stabbed repeatedly by her husband.[75] A coronial inquest initiated by the state coroner and 10 recommendations were issued. Normally, the coroner would issue recommendations to the SAPOL Commissioner of Police, however, in this instance, the coroner issued to findings to the premier of South Australia which in turn would bring it to the attention of the Commissioner of Police.[76][77] A direct consequence of the coroner's recommendations, the Women's Domestic Violence Court Assistance Service (WDVCAS) was launched in 2015, which provides free legal advice and it is funded by the Victims of Crime levy.[78]

Edited:

On 22 March 2011, Zahra Abrahimzadeh died after being stabbed repeatedly by her husband.[75] A coronial inquest was initiated by the state coroner and 10 recommendations were issued. Normally, the coroner would issue recommendations to the SAPOL Commissioner of Police, however, in this instance, the coroner issued the findings to the premier of South Australia, which in turn brought it to the attention of the Commissioner of Police.[76][77] As a direct consequence of the coroner's recommendations, the Women's Domestic Violence Court Assistance Service (WDVCAS) was launched in 2015, which provides victims with free legal advice and is funded by the Victims of Crime levy.[78]

Activist Article Action Plan

1.The link to an existing web page or stub or a brief outline (sentence or two) of what the new article will be about.

Roger Callahan doesn't have his own page, he developed Thought Field Therapy (TFT) Thought Field Therapy. The new article will be about Callahan, his upbringing and          education, career, family etc. It will also detail the development of TFT and list his publications.

2. TFT has it's own page, and there are links from there to other psychologists when discussing studies involving TFT, but no page for Callahan himself. The therapy is backed by lots of research, but it's quite controversial in the psychology world because many of the studies were not very valid/reliable and used bad study designs. Nevertheless, Callahan put a lot of work in to the therapy development and other things in the Psychology world.

SOUNDS A GOOD IDEA EMMA - SEEMS APPROPRIATE THAT THE INVENTOR OF AN APPROACH THAT HAS A PAGE (HOWEVER CONTROVERSIAL) SHOULD HAVE HIS OWN PAGE.

3. A check list on the requirements for getting an article published or revisions etc. accepted and published in Wikipedia. (Sorry Jane I missed class and don't know where to look for this information)

'''YOU WILL FIND THIS ON FLO IN THE WIKIPEDIA JUST IN TIME GUIDES ... THERE ARE SEVERAL ARTICLES THAT WILL PROVIDE YOU WITH THIS INFORMATION. EVALUATING A WIKIPEDIA ARTICLE, AND INTRODUCTION TO EDITING HAVE THE CRITERION FOR INFORMATION SOURCES ETC.'''

4. What research tasks will be required to ensure your work conforms with the Wikipedia article requirements for publishing?Make a List.

- his early life inc. birthplace & date, where he grew up, family etc. when he died

- his family: wife, children, grandchildren

- education: university, degrees etc

- publications: books, journals etc

- TFT development & overview

- need to make sure all sources are reliable

Sources I might use:

https://www.hachette.com.au/roger-callahan/

http://www.rogercallahan.com/news/dr-roger-callahan-the-world-lost-a-great-man/

http://www.rogercallahan.com/callahan.php

http://tappingsolution.s3.amazonaws.com/TheTappingSolution-Chap1-2.pdf

Obituary https://www.legacy.com/obituaries/name/roger-callahan-obituary?pid=167997091

GREAT START EMMA