User:Emmazeko/Hunger in the United States/Wombatsaregreat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emmazeko


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emmazeko/Hunger_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hunger in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
I appreciate how you added the legend of what is italicized and from the original article and what is your own writing. Your suggestions are clear, concise, and add important clarification to the article and you do a really good job on keeping a neutral, encyclopedia voice in addition to properly citing your sources. You did a great job on elaborating more on the "History: 20th Century" section: all added information is relevant and well-written and the historical context and legislative markers are important to have. I'm excited to see what else you will add, especially to the section where you write about possible additions and transform your thoughts into more writing!