User:EmmettForster/Toltec/Ramirezd2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

EmmettForster


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:EmmettForster/Toltec?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Toltec

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article would be well served by additional citations; many statements are not cited and would need to be verified. Additionally, the majority of the article is supported by rather old research. As part of your edits you could try and seek out some more recent sources and see if they could comprise a new section and/or update a concept in the article. From your sandbox it looks like you are editing the "Archaeology" section, which is a great idea. This section is rather small and doesn't highlight in great detail any Toltec sites, artifacts, or otherwise, and could be greatly enhanced by additional research. Overall, I think you could significantly improve the "Archaeology" section by adding in more sources/research, particularly on Toltec sites like Tula. There are a lot of images on the article of Tula, but very little in the way of archeological analysis.