User:Emmitross/Architectural mythology/Domenick4303 Peer Review

General info
Emmitross
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emmitross/Architectural mythology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Architectural mythology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:
 * Short and sweet introduction, it gets the point across of what the article is about.
 * I would've liked to see a couple more sentences, but this is a good start.
 * Great quote to finish it off!

Content:


 * Great pictures that are relevant to the information you are providing.
 * Each paragraph gives a short summary of some examples of ancient Greek, Roman, and Egyptian mythological architecture.
 * I would've liked to see another example of mythological architecture in the Ancient Roman Architecture section.
 * Content is relevant to the topic of the article.

References:


 * I like how you separated your scholarly article references from your book references.
 * Added more references than asked of. Awesome!
 * Great job linking references like regular Wikipedia articles do.

Notes:


 * Great organization of content.
 * Holds a neutral tone, didn't try and persuade the reader.
 * I think there might be some sentences that could use some commas, I encourage you to go through the article again to see if you agree.
 * Overall great article and great work!