User:Emmitross/Architectural mythology/Tantallon99 Peer Review

General info
Emmitross
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Emmitross/Architectural_mythology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Architectural mythology

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe that the article could use some substantial additions, but it was well done overall. All of the information is relevant and significant. I do not believe that the quotation was necessary for the lead, but the rest of it was fantastic. The tone was neutral and balanced. The content was all up to date, relevant, and unbiased, but I felt that there could have been more. All of the subjects seemed to be fairly limited in scope, and there could have been many more global styles and examples of architecture discussed. One of the images was an illustration of the Tower of Babel, but it was not mentioned in the article, making its inclusion questionable. However, I felt that the article was well written and strongly improved by the edits.