User:Emmitross/Architectural mythology/Uggghhh Peer Review

Overall I think was a very interesting topic to cover. I think it is great that there is multiple different cultures of mythology to pull from as well as a good introduction to tell readers what architectural mythology is. Within each section I think there needs to be some in-depth discussion about where in mythology these stories or buildings are found. For example: I think the sphynx is a great example and there is a good description of what it is according to mythology, however, maybe there could be added information such as how the sphynx was seen in Oedipus Rex and was proven to be a protector in that story as you stated. I think you have done well in this paper to keep a neutral tone, only stating the historical facts that are associated with the myths and stated what they believed as simple fact rather than trying to make the reader feel a certain way. As far as the writing itself goes, there could be a few words changes just to make the writing more clear. Overall this was a very interesting topic.

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